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14 Simple Ways to Write Product Descriptions That Sell like Hot Cakes [+ Examples]
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14 Simple Ways to Write Product Descriptions That Sell like Hot Cakes [+ Examples]

July 21, 2019, 10 Mins Read.
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How to create great product descriptions that sell?

No, it’s not just rattling on without taking a pause and coming to a stop about your products or services.

And no, excellent product descriptions have nothing to do with extensive paragraphs jam-packed with product details. Hardly anyone will ever read long-winded memoirs if they bore the reader to death from the very first line.

And, of course, it’s not solely about keywords, links, and all that mind-blowing SEO stuff that is supposed to help get better search positions in Google.

You’ll be surprised, but robust product descriptions are all about sharing your passion & explaining value to your target customers.

Steve Jobs, the inventor of the well-loved Apple gadgets, believed that ‘people with passion can change the world for the better’.

Richard Branson, the founder of the Virgin and just an eccentric billionaire, too, is sure that ‘passion, like a smile, is contagious’.

Can you say that you are passionate about the products you sell online?

If not, you are doomed to drown in a sea of stronger competitors earlier than you launch your eCommerce business.

In this article, we’ll answer all the most important questions you need to address when creating product descriptions for your online store and give step-by-step information that will have you enjoying a piece of that appetizing eCommerce pie.

Stats that prove the importance of product content for eCommerce

Before digging into the aspects of creating high-quality product descriptions, let’s first take a helicopter view of the whole state of things in general.

Judging by the Episerver’s “Reimagining Commerce” report, a whopping 98% of customers are deterred from making a purchase, because they lack information about the product or it is incorrect.

Just think of that! Only 2% of online shoppers do not give a toss about product features and benefits before buying them online.

Another argument in favour of creating proper product descriptions is the fact that, according to the Salsify’s “Cracking the Consumer Code” research, 87% of shoppers find product content extremely valuable and prefer to read a little bit about the product before they decide to finally buy it.

The same study proved that half of the online shoppers return the item they buy because it doesn’t match the product description.

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What do all these facts mean for you as a merchant?

In addition to its countless SEO benefits, thorough item descriptions play a vital role in the purchasing decisions of today’s consumers and, done right, can massively increase your sales.

So if your product descriptions lack accuracy (to say nothing of the products without any description at all!), do not be mocked with false hopes that your business will become in any way successful online.

And if a crappy product description can turn your potential customers away from the sale, the lack of one will make matters even worse.

To sum up, I dare say that content is one of the best investments today’s online merchants can make.

Following are some of the best strategies and approaches you can implement right away.

1. Highlight the benefits of your products

The time when shoppers were fully satisfied with one-size-fits-all descriptions is long gone.

Now people are no longer interested in earth-bound features and specifications. They are eager to find out what’s in it for THEM personally and how it will solve their troubles and save them from the biggest regrets.

The first lesson for you, no matter how shopworn it may sound to you, — do not sell products, sell an experience.

Take a look at Method, San-Francisco based company manufacturing biodegradable natural cleaning supplies.

It feels like they know their target audience inside out and cares about their feelings.

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Being a Method’s customer, I wouldn’t worry about my wardrobe even if I accidentally got a stain on my fav skirt.

They promise that my whites will stay white and colours stay bright. And I can well believe it.

2. Use humour

Do not be afraid to perfect your joke-telling skills when writing descriptions for the products or services you sell online.

Just don’t over-indulge — too much of a good thing is good for nothing.

Humorous materials have been widely used in advertising for a good reason. According to the International Journal of Humor Research, they tend to be recalled at higher rates than non-humorous ones.

And here I cannot but name-check Palace, a London-based skateboard shop and clothing brand, with the funniest (… and the weirdest!) product descriptions I’ve ever stumbled upon on the web.

Their minimalistic design leaves their copywriters with no other option than to be creative.

Have a look at this multicolour windbreaker for, to put it correctly, big-boned guys from Palace.

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What about these kebab-related reflections of yesterday?

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3. Keep SEO in mind

Hilarious product descriptions are good when you reckon upon word of mouth as the key advertising channel.

However, if you are looking to acquire new customers from Google, random copy written with a good sense of humour but without any logic and common sense (like that of Palace) won’t work, sorry.

What I mean here is that search engine optimization should not be an afterthought.

Let’s take CarID, a well-known automotive online store built with X-Cart eCommerce software.

If we analyze a random page (this one about custom wheels and rims, for instance) using SEMRush or any traffic analytics tool, we’ll see that their website is performing quite well in terms of SEO.

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There are over 3.6K different keywords that bring users to their domain via Google’s top 100 organic search results. And the number is growing, which promises good potential for the owners.

4. Define your buyer personas

Forget about crowds of unidentified buyers — each and every client of yours is a unique personality with their own interests, worries, and hopes for the bright future.

Try to understand what your audience is craving for. Or just follow the example of Soap & Glory — fun, fresh, fearless, and fantastic British beauty brand from Nottingham, England.

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‘Cards Against Humanity’ also keep their ideal buyer in mind — a horrible person, with despicable and awkward friends.

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Hah, they know exactly who they are selling to, for sure!

5. Keep things simple

The easier your product descriptions are, the more transparent your brand may seem to your target audience.

Speak the language your customers use in everyday life. Do not try to be too smart. Relax and let your copy sound lighthearted.

Take, for instance, the much-loved Dollar Shave Club.

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They do not try to confuse their users with lofty phrases. Everything is quite simple — short paragraphs ordered lists. They address the reader as ‘you’, thus making the relationship a bit more personal.

6. Be honest

Do the products you sell have any drawbacks?

I’m sure that there is at least one thing that you conceal from your customers. Don’t.

Your shoppers will appreciate your willingness, to be frank about your brand. They’ll see that your copy is not just a marketing ad, but an accurate description that depicts your product from various angles.

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Take a look at FIREBOX. They claim to sell unusual gifts for people with imagination, and they really do.

For example, Beer Belly Jelly spreadable beer, “won’t give you a belly unless you scoff the lot in one go.”

7. Make your copy easily scannable

If you are able to encapsulate your ideas in a few short paragraphs, you can be proudly named a pro copywriter.

Innocent Drinks, selling more than two million smoothies per week, know how to market their products right.

Make your copy easily scannable-apple & mango juice

Only the main points are highlighted. Or what else could be said about apple & mango juice other than that these fruits are delicious? They are, indeed.

8. Explain how your customers may use your product

Providing customers with clear instructions on how to use your products is vital. This, again, means that you care about people.

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This Etsy seller knew that hung inside, out of direct sunlight, this Blue and White Dried Flower Wreath will last for years.

And this may turn your first-time shoppers into loyal standing customers.

9. Tell your story

There’s nothing more engaging than stories. You can try and use this trick in your copy. And I’m sure there’s a lot to share. Introduce your shoppers to the history of your brand.

Tell what inspired you to create this product and fancy how your product can be valuable to the buyer.

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This Sass & Belle keep growing planter is not just a run-of-the-mill pot that can be easily found on any Chinese website like Alibaba. There is a whole history behind this brand.

10. Appeal to emotions

This is one of the most common tricks that marketing professionals use to persuade people to buy a product, subscribe to monthly services or updates, or just to be more impressive.

An emotional appeal works best when you use images that evoke emotions like joy, sadness, to name but a few.

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That’s what FIREBOX (yeah, here they go again!) does. Just look up at that melancholy Stuffed Blobfish face. It will never leave you unfazed.

The same goes for the other Firebox products — you’ll either blubber like a whale or laugh out loud, but you’ll never be left indifferent.

Firebox took a step further and created product descriptions that speak directly to a targeted emotion.

11. Embrace your eccentric side

Eccentricity is one of the effective ways that brands can use to make their products or services stand out.

Kallø, a Dutch company focused on organic foods, has become famous for its sometimes bizarre and geeky self-written poems.

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Just think of that — this is a poem about organic vegetable bouillon! No one has ever made rhymes about stock vegetables that ‘lived on the farm’ and ‘rarely went out with their fruit and veg chums’.

If you also want your brand to show up, surprise your website visitors with something extraordinary.

12. Keep to the point

To write an excellent product description that sells, you need to do much more than educating customers.

Not to bore the reader to death with sprawling sentences, it is critical to be succinct and to-the-point.. just like ThinkGeek.

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We can witness here that product description for a mug does not have to be dry. ThinkGeek created an effective three-sentence reader-friendly product description, that will transport your mind back to the 90’s when the Mario game was popular.

No, it won’t be warping you anywhere.

13. Create consistency in your tone

No matter how different your products are, it’s recommended to maintain the same level of consistency in your product descriptions across your eCommerce site.

Otherwise, users may be disappointed when they notice that your product pages do not live up to their expectations.

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There’s nothing too extravagant or special about Fab’s products descriptions. However, all of them are of the same size, tone, and with the same buyer personas in mind.

14. Avoid generic phrases

No one likes such boring generic phrases as ‘excellent hand soap’ or ‘of the best quality’. That’s what everyone says. And that sounds highly unprofessional.

What is unique about your products?

Amazon, for example, knows why Kindle is the most advanced e-reader:

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Tone down your expressiveness, use moderate words, or just explain the superlatives you use.

An ‘excellent hand soap’ can be replaced by something like a ‘soap for killing disease-causing germs’. And a backpack that is ‘of the best-quality’ means that it ‘keeps your laptop dry even if you are caught by the rain’.

And if you’ve got nothing to say, just quote a happy customer who is madly in love with your products. This will add more credibility to your copy.

The Bottom Line

Now that you know a little bit about writing great product descriptions, it’s high time you got down to business and reviewed your website copy.

Mastering products copy will definitely require some time, testing and, what is more important, creativity.

Don’t be afraid of experimenting with your copy, and maybe someday your product description will be used as an example in an article like this.

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AboutHelen Golubeva :

Helen Golubeva, a storyteller at X-Cart eCommerce shopping cart. Addicted to yoga, interested in philosophy, and totally mad about copywriting. I love to use the power of words to inspire people and help them grow their eCommerce businesses.